February 4th Zelda's exericse

Posted on: Sun, 02/04/2007 - 22:25 By: Tom Swiss

At Zelda's - missed first exerfcise, busy ripping hole in the living room wall for the satellite cable. It was to write a five stanza poem, with one for each of the five senses.

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exercise 2: wordlist, on the theme: music
/guitar /emotion treble harmony pitch melody comfort /catharsis visions dance /tension /colors /sharp /crescendo /voice

seeking catharsis of sharp emotion
voice rises in a sharp SCREAM
let it out through the throat
instead of taking up a sharp blade
to let it out through the skin

tension builds like tightening a guitar string
until something must either snap or be cut
the noise reaches a crescendo
the colors become like stones thrown into the eye

too much for one body to bear
so she opens her body
tearing open a container